A Challenge Layout

I created this layout tonight for a challenge for The Boxx. I like it, but I'm not in love with it. You know the feeling when you finish a layout and you have such a sense of accomplishment and then as you glance at it, you wonder "Did I really create that?! It's beautiful!" Well, maybe not, but I have---on occasion. Really. It's okay to be proud--very proud of your work. Afterall, you've put your heart and soul into this work of art--this piece of legacy--so you should feel a sense of overwhelming pride and joy in yourself and in your work when it comes out---PERFECT!
That being said, I didn't get that from this. I don't know why. It's missing something (or more than one something) but I can't put a finger on it. If anyone wants to suggest something--feel free! I'm open! But, anyway, thanks for looking. I'll be creating more layouts tomorrow and have them posted soon.